"Adaluc's" story

For lack of a better name, this is Adaluc's story, named so because Adaluc is the first character I created for the story. Sam and I started this story together in a chat room one day, when I started behaving like Adaluc, a young man cast out from his home for murdering his blood-sib, and Sam started acting like a young woman who was thrown out of her home for wanting to choose her own path in life, later named Zalanna.

The next day in school we discussed these two some more and came up with some more details about their lives. Then I started writing about how they were kicked out of their homes and then met up. I will eventually continue it...getting it past where it is right now, which is right after Adaluc finishes with his story. (By the way, I happen to really like Adaluc's story, and I can't wait until I get to play with his blood-sib Kur some more!)

I want to rewrite most of what I have so far of this story...I will probably leave most of Adaluc's tale intact, but I think I'm going to split Zalanna's tale up and disperse it throughout the story...but none of this will happen until I feel a little more inspired to write this story...